Drafting and Planning: Feedback to First Draft

My magazine was assessed by another student in my class. They gave me feedback on what went well on my magazine and what is needed to improve.

The things that went well include that my colour scheme is consistent. I have also included a range of fonts and images. My magazine contains symbiosis and the positioning of stories and images is apparently effective. There is a good use of settings and props, and the band actually look like a band.

To improve, I could include more cover lines. I could make the text of the band name bigger. I could put numbers on my secondary image on the contents page to link with the actual page number. Additionally, I could make fonts over images bigger and bolder.